Richard, the DOF seems really small. Can not see what you used, as you haven't mentioned the aperture. The eye seems sharp but I would like to see more sharpness on the head and the breast.
The repost is much better as far as sharpness and I like the COMP as well. The bright spot left center and the dark spot lrc could use some loving attention with a 40% hardness Clone Stamp Tool.
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