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    This duck takes to the air with a gallop.

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    Nice timing and water color. The wing position could have been better. Do you have a frame with wings up or down? It might work better as a horizontal with more space in front of the duck.

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    HI Bill,

    I have to agree with Axel's comments. Horizontal would work better for this image. I would also remove some of the noise.

    Keep them coming!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Axel Hildebrandt View Post
    Nice timing and water color. The wing position could have been better. Do you have a frame with wings up or down? It might work better as a horizontal with more space in front of the duck.
    Great observations, Axel. I'll look back and see what's there with better wings showing. I'll also loosen the crop and go horizontal. I was trying to highlight the water reflections, thus the reason for the vertical. I'll repost if possible.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maxis Gamez View Post
    HI Bill,

    I have to agree with Axel's comments. Horizontal would work better for this image. I would also remove some of the noise.

    Keep them coming!
    Thanks, Maxis!
    I can easily reduce the noise, and I'll do that if I post a redo of the image.

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