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    300mm f9.5 iso 800 1/750 cropped added a little contrast removed part of post
    love comments i added a highlight but it has disappeared
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    Hey Grahame,
    The highlight is definitely gone and I would rework it to get it back in....the ey just gets lost. Overall it appear a bit dark too. Did you apply a filter to this....appears a tad soft. Lot's of questions on this one....so will await some additional input to further add input.

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    Grahame, I like the pose and the perch. The background looks lovely and adds a bit of drama to the image. I think the face area could go a little lighter.

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    I like the pose and like your choice of aperture that gives just enough focus on the perch to make it interesting. Agree a little work on the face and eye would improve the image, along with a tad of work in the dark throat area. Careful with the throat though, I think it would be easy to over-do it.

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