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    Default Tide Pool

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    CP used

    Dan Kearl

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    Dan - I like the comp and the line of surf in the distance. Not a fan of having what I presume is your shadow in the fg. Also not sure of what is happening with the rocks on the lhs, is it localized mist? It just looks a little strange and out of place. I might also crop a little from the top.


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    Hey Dan,
    Looks like you had a drop or twon on the CP on the LHS that Rachel mentioned.....easy fix. I would crop just a sliver off the bottom.....just to eliminate the dark area in the 5'oclock frame edge. Not sure you can do anything about the shadow......perhpas lightening it?......ducking or crouching down in the field may work.....or setting the sself timer and walking away can also work....just some thoughts for next time out in the field. Minor tweaks will take this up a notch.

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    Hi Dan, overall I like the comp. Our shadows do become problematic at times, but Roman offers some good suggestions for minimizing or eliminating them.

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    Thanks all, yes the spots were drops on the lens I think and I should have taken care of them.
    My shadow also.
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