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    RR Donavan
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    This image was made late in the day. I wish he had turned his head a bit more towards me but I like the back view and the dark BG.

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    Agree for the head turn,otherwise a nice shot with excellent bg

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    Nice details, I agree on the head angle and overall it looks a bit flat on my monitor. Maybe a bit more contrast and slight increase of color temperature could help.

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    I would also warm it up a little. and crop a little tighter.

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    Lovely image and I too would like to see it cropped a little more so as to bring the subject into more prominence in the frame. and I echo Axels remarks on contrast and color . You mnetioned the head turn but still a very s beautiful image. thanks for sharing.

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    Niicely done, RR. I agree with your self-critique. Biggest plus? Excellent use of -do-f as needed with the rear view.

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