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    Spotted this fellow a few weeks ago, meant to post for critique, but I forgot!

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    Hi Charles, very nice capture here. Textbook shooting angle, nice exposure and color, and good composition. Maybe a little more room on the right, a bit of lightening of the eye, a slight bump in contrast (or maybe just a mid-range boost), and you have a keeper. Well done!
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    Really like this one, love the low angle. Important to see their world well done. You might clean up the green rock underneath the neck if you want. Maybe a tad tight - all subjective - nice one,..keep em coming.

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    I like this one too Charles. Nice eastern population, breeding-plumage Willet. Great sharpness and eye-level camera angle, both important components of a quality wildlife portrait. I can see some detail in the eye but I think the subject needs to be lightened a little. Agree that the subject is a little tight in the frame- I would add a little to the top and right.

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    Kerry, thank you very much sir! I appreciate the constructive criticism on this image. Indeed, it needs more brightening of the subject!

    Jeff, thanks a lot! Personally, I like that little green nub as it adds to the "environment", but as you say it's all personal!

    John, I'll go edit a different version and post as soon as I can!

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    Mighty fine shootin, very sharp and I also would like to see more "eye!"

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    Sorry it took so long to get a reply up!

    Thanks a lot again for the compliment, here is the "edited" shot.


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    Charles, this looks great to me - you have a high key look going now. Very nice!
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