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    Stephen Davis
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    Default Mute Swan

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    Thanks for looking
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    Last edited by Stephen Davis; 03-27-2008 at 08:15 PM.

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    Hello Stephen,

    This is a beautiful bird and the pose is perfect. You could add some canvas to the top in order to give more room over the head. You seem to have over sharpened the bird.

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Stephen,

    I like the blue color reflection. I would suggest that you crop off the reflection of the swan since it is not strong. Removing it will draw the viewer right to the bird. Then the top would look OK. My version below. Don't forget about virtual feet.
    Last edited by Robert Amoruso; 03-27-2008 at 08:26 PM.

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    Gus Cobos
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    Very nice composition, love the color of the water, must agree with the rest about giving your swan more room on top. Also the background could be just a tid bit lighter for my taste...:D

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    Jody Melanson
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    I agree with Robert here as the reflection is not adding anything to this. Nice use of flash.

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    Alfred Forns
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    Firts thing I thought was getting rid of the reflection I like the re post !!!

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    Judy Lynn Malloch
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    Pretty capture and excellent exposure. I agree about the cropping and like very much Robert's repost. Thanks for sharing Stephen.

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