This is a beautiful bird and the pose is perfect. You could add some canvas to the top in order to give more room over the head. You seem to have over sharpened the bird.
I like the blue color reflection. I would suggest that you crop off the reflection of the swan since it is not strong. Removing it will draw the viewer right to the bird. Then the top would look OK. My version below. Don't forget about virtual feet.
Last edited by Robert Amoruso; 03-27-2008 at 08:26 PM.
Very nice composition, love the color of the water, must agree with the rest about giving your swan more room on top. Also the background could be just a tid bit lighter for my taste...:D