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    Default Wait!! Don't Take my photo.

    As per Title, this Little jumper. Telling No to me don't... Take my photo.
    Well it was found me in my backyard. And I found that it was doing unique activities with their pedipalp (Body part,Comes near to poison glad)And from This Pedipalp Hiding his eye.
    for some times I don't now Why..
    but I captured nice moment of this jumper.
    Hope you enjoy it.


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    Great job, Joshi! You captured an interesting behavioral moment. Sharp where it needs to be and I like the soft BG and FG. I do recommend cropping just enough from the left to remove the bright area, which will both eliminate a distracting element and improve the composition. Eyes are already on a rule of thirds line and the suggested crop would bring them further from the left-right center and closer to a ROT point. Your work has really improved--congratulations!

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    Hi Joshi, very funny pose of this little fellow! He doesn't seem to like the flash!
    Nice details, exposure and BG. Well done!

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    Hi Joshi. You captured a cool pose that fits your title very well! I wonder if these guys use their pedipalps to clean their eyes - like a windshield wiper?? The sharpness is right where it needs to be and I like the off-center comp. I agree that the white area on the left should be removed - either by cropping or cloning over it. You might also consider toning down the bright area to the right of the spider. These tweaks will take this interesting image up a notch or two. Overall, this is well done.

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    Thanks Steve for information..

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