Nice first post. You might try sharpening the bird a little more. It looks as though the point of focus was just behind the subject. I'm a fan of oof foregrounds but if you take a little from bottom I think it strengthens the image. The bird facing towards you would have been nicer, but it seems that they dont always listen to our instructions (kinda like kids:) ).
Todd
Hi Mitch! Welcome to BPN, hope we can help you improve your skills!
Nicely composed, but there are two things wrong, basically, we need for him to turn his head towards us and he looks soft, so more sharpening is in order.
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