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    exposure looks good, and great pose. I think extra sharpening on the bird could achieve a lot, and rotate a bit anticlockwise to straighten the horizon in the background. You might need to extend the canvas a little then though to avoid clipping the wings.

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    off course for the horizont; I no made it because I wait notice about the shoot befoure go on . For me the problem is also the dimensionality. What I can do for it ...only sharpening more ?
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    otherwise I like it. sharpening, rotation and perhaps some contrast boost would be the major steps for me. Have you worked on the feathers on the upper wing? some look strangely round.

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    Looks good to me, Giovanni. I especially like the wing tip in the water. I agree with Geoff -- just some rotation, a bit of sharpening, and a little contrast boost or levels adjustment to make the whites whiter.

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    what a pose. Very nice angle as well. As Bill said, that wing tip topuching the water is indeed a plus. Good critiques above that will help improve the image a lot.

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