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    I am not sure about this shoot.
    The shoot was underesposed to make a blak background...but the light is on the face...but what you think about ?
    Canon Mark IV
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    f.7,1
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    Hi Giovanni, I like the concept, but on my screen I can still see a lot of details in the 'black' background, which is distracting. Maybe using the black point dropper in levels/curves you can fix the background.

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    ok thanks..
    but I not worked on the shoot. It is nly a conversion from raw..

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    Love the idea , and the execution is very good . Agree with Geoff on the distractions . The original needed sharpening too .
    Have attempted a quick rework using fast stone , on an uncallibrated monitor . Do let me know if it works .

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    Thanks a lot
    It is fine..but with more time I will sharpen and I will remove distractions . Is better by clone or what ?

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    Based on your original, I would go for either a version with enough light in the background, as the hoopoe leaving the barrel is interesting too, or a fully black background version. You shouldn't need to clone much for those options, just adjust the exposure/black point appropriately. Rakesh's repost is much closer to the fully black background, and personally I find the image a bit TOO black in this case, so would vote for a colour option.

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