Hi Graham, this looks much better! I like that more is sharp. That also compliments the different shades of green. It's too bad that the tip of the spike is OOF. You can add a little selective sharpness there to lessen the effect. Well done!
Hey Grahame,
Very nice job incorporating the suggestions on the previous post. I have debated toning down the green in the sideways V on the right ....but all in all I am really liking this one!