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    Re did tried to do suggestions i think it looks better Comments please

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    More better Image..Nice effect of Glow and soft spike in bottom..Water droplets added extra strength in this image..

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    Hi Graham, this looks much better! I like that more is sharp. That also compliments the different shades of green. It's too bad that the tip of the spike is OOF. You can add a little selective sharpness there to lessen the effect. Well done!

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    Nicely done. I like the inclusion of the bit of stem in LLC as well as using the big leaf in bg to back stop the spike.

    Photo has a nice feel to it.

    Dave

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    Hi Grahame. This is a major improvement! I like the increased DOF and the soft lighting is very well handled. Well done.

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    Hey Grahame,
    Very nice job incorporating the suggestions on the previous post. I have debated toning down the green in the sideways V on the right ....but all in all I am really liking this one!

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    Much improved from OP, Grahame!

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    I like this a lot!. Much better! I like the green tones, the composition and texture. Nice lighting too.

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    Very nice, Grahame. Really like the lighting on this.

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