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    Great fun! Thanks for the suggested OOB theme and the tutorial link. This technique has a lot of possibilities.

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    neat effect and well done. A fun photo

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    Too cool. The image has some compositional issues as it is right-side-heavy.... The tree is too centered. Moving it well to our left would improve the creation quite a bit. Placing the leaving duck with its head clear of the frame might also work well.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Too cool. The image has some compositional issues as it is right-side-heavy.... The tree is too centered. Moving it well to our left would improve the creation quite a bit. Placing the leaving duck with its head clear of the frame might also work well.
    Thanks for the suggestions - here's what I came up wih adjusting the composition and adding a shadow to the departing bird. Let me know what you think.

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    Nice composition, Dawn. I like your repost. Nicely done.

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    Like the newly designed COMP much better. I could do without the shadow but love the new placement of the departee.
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    Dawn, Nice job on this. I like the repost and Artie makes a good suggestion regarding the shadow. I really like how you set this one up.

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    Very nicely done Dawn..repost rocks. I tried but haven't been able to come up with any ideas, looks tough.

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    Quote Originally Posted by denise ippolito View Post
    Dawn, Nice job on this. I like the repost and Artie makes a good suggestion regarding the shadow. I really like how you set this one up.
    Sometimes we can go too far with editing revisions - thanks all for helping me pull this one back.

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    Looks great!

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    Nice work Dawn. The repost rocks!

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    Good one Dawn, nice concept and execution. Your fine-tuning with Artie's suggestions really made for a nice final image. Well done!
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    Great job, Dawn! I love the bird flying out of the frame, and Artie's suggestions made it perfect. Well done!
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    Nice job!! Congratulations. Looks real.

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    Thank you for all the wonderful comments and the inspiration for this image.

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