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    Default Just yellow..

    Well, same yellow rose but different experiment.. i try to take some pattern.. yes, it not sharp, Captured it without sharpness..
    only some add light.. That it.. no more editing...
    flash on.. With canon A495
    F:4.5
    ISO:8.0
    what you think about cropping??..

    Last edited by bhavya joshi; 05-16-2011 at 10:05 AM.

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    Nice pattern, Joshi. Softness doesn't bother me, but I do have two recommendations:
    • The center seems to be "looking" right, so I think the composition would work better looser on the right and tighter on the left. You could also try a square crop.
    • There is some dirt or petal damage just to the left and above center--this would be easy to remove via cloning or quick mask techniques.

    Keep exploring abstract compositions!

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    Hey Joshi,
    I do like Mitch's suggestions above. You do need to tone down the yellows a bit especially in the ULC . I did try an alternate crop...to help minimize the LH and RH side. I think thi shelps and also takes the main focus away from the center a bit more. Let me know what you think.

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    Thanks roman for re-post. i was little confused about cropping you helped it .., thanks.
    I gave little more light to flower .. but i think it was a bad idea.

    I am expermenting on this image with tint, warminity.. etc.. what you all think about B/w in this image with more light and more shadow..??? look different??

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    Joshi, I like the soft focus on this one and the yellow is very nice. Roman's repost really works well with the crop and the toned down yellows. Nice work!

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