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    From our local beach. Things are heating up.

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    Sharp with intense colors. You needed to be about five yards to your right to better parallel the subjects. Could go a bit lighter overall.
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    Joe:

    This is an interesting subject, well composed and exposed, and sharp. I find the green debris in the foreground somewhat distracting but probably would not remove it.

    Well done!

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    Nice job Joe. Like the open beak and the females leg being up a bit. I'm a little bothered by the what appears to be the opposite wing toward the back of the bird, possibly beach debris??? Hope to see you out there one of these days.

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    Great pose and colors. I think I would try eliminating the green debris, but that's a personal choice. OOF right wing is a little distracting but not a killer IMHO (could easily be removed but might look unbalanced).

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