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    Default African Spoonbill

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    BG is OOF Red Cyanite rock, bush and trees. Cropped to what I think works for comp...Advice and crits as well as comments always appreciated

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    I always like these angled diagonal flight postures, and good DOF. The spoonbill is separated nicely from the BG, and comp wise, I would probably add a bit more to the bottom.

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    Nice diagonal and I like the overall comp. A little more eye contact would be nice but that is hard to get in an incoming shot like this.

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    Sweet! Maybe a bit tight on the left.

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    sweet light and great pose!
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    Good sharpness. Not a bad idea to add a sliver of canvas on the left. I wouldn't mind a bit more of a profile view of the head. I'd consider darkening the bottom of the right half of the image.
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    Thanks guys...I did forget to mention this is full frame except a crop from the top and bottom. I will look at adding a touch to the left

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    I really like this image as presented. If you were printing and matting it you could use a complimentary color on the mat and give the illusion of a bit more canvas. The colors of your background are so pleasing.

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    Dumay, you nailed the techs. perfect DOF. loved the incoming angle.

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    Stunning shot.. Love it...love to see the repost with the suggestions made.

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    Thanks for taking the time to view and crit folks!

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