I appreciate your suggestions. I agree with you on the crop, especially from the top. It would definitely improve it.
And, yes, I should have had the iso much higher! I was just not thinking!
As for the small branches sticking out from the left; that bird had tried to land on those branches, and was just launching off them as this picture was taken. We were all laughing at the way those big birds would sit on the tiniest branches. (As mentioned, hurricane Ike really did a number on this rookery, and there aren't many large limbs left) For that reason I dickered over whether to clone those out.
In view of that, what do you think? Better to get rid of them, since no one who sees it knows the story behind the little branches? Or leave them in as part of the story?