Good job with DOF under difficult lighting conditions. LIke the title.
When the eye turns in, its called esotropia. Because the pupil is also irregular, do wonder if this eye has had an old injury, which often leads to strabismus(misalignment of the eyes)
Love the way you have framed this one and the story it tells. Colors and IQ look pretty good to me considering the conditions. I think I would add a little black to the owlet's pupil.