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    Default Water tiny frog. 2

    This is second one.. with new pose and angle..with new species. (Need ID please.. anyone??):2

    This is also taken in past year.. This frog have dust over his body so.. I cannot take his body pattern.. I think is better than my earlier thread.
    Hope you all like it..
    With canon A495
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    Very nice, Joshi! You nailed the focus. And we can see the face! Almost seems to be smiling. May want to do some burning to darken the rock (which looks reptilian!) a little. I'm also tempted to suggest a bit more breathing room on the right, but that would move the eye away from ROT position so I think you are better off as is.

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    Hey Joshi,
    This one is definitely better for my tastes. The flash is a bit strong but I do think if you tone down the LH side a bit ......that will take it up a notch. Even though I like tight crops.....just a touch more room in front.......but overall.....this is an improvement and you are headed in the right direction!

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    Hi Joshi. I would agree with the comments above. This one has a much better viewing angle. A couple additional tweaks would take this one up a notch - you might consider carefully cloning some of the flash-generated specular highlights on the frog and trying to lighten the dark shadow underneath the frog.

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    Nice pose and sharp where it needs. I like the the rock. Good suggestions above, you might clean up the debris ( or whatever it is) on the hind leg.

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    Hey Joshi, I completely agree with what has been said by the previous posters! A little more pp work and this one will shine!

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    Thank you.. all for nice suggestion.. it will be helpful ..

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