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    Arsdel:

    Interesting perch without overpowering the bird.
    Lighting draws our attention to the head/face, exposure looks good.

    The bill and eye seem a bit sharper than top of head.

    I might take a small crop from the top, and consider eliminating the bit of leaf RLC.

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    I like the feel and mood of this one. It seems like a typical west coast day.

    Composition is very good and good idea to eliminate the bit of leaf.

    Perhaps a bit warmer??

    Lots of detail and very sharp.

    Dave

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    I like this image as it has a certain "feel" about it, agree about cloning out the leaf in RLC.

    Maybe a slight crop off the top, or consider cloning out the OOF object in the top left corner.

    Shaun

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    Also like it, and agree with comments above.

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    Love the mood. I am in agreement about the crop and cloning. Still sweet as it is.

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    Definitely a western washington feel to this. I agree with the leaf comment and think a crop to below the oof bit in the upper left corner or a clone out would help a bit. With or without it is still a great photo.

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    Very nice composition......

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    Thanks all.

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