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    very very nice...

    On my pc too much saturation but all is ok !

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    Nice flight image ballet

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    Lovely pose and excellent wing detail!

    Agree bill and eye look a bit too saturated.
    Ideally, would like head to be parallel or angled toward viewer rather than angled away.
    Pose makes for a tricky composition IMO.
    Might go a bit more toward vertical, i.e. not as wide.

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    I like the soft light and the graceful pose. A pity you didn't include the settings and that there is no exif either.

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    I like the overall pose especially the wings. I agree the saturation is a bit much, and comp-wise I would prefer more room above than below. A bit of noise on the near wing's darker area...did you need to lighten in post? (exif info would help...)

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    Pauline:

    An elegant pose, sharp.
    Please do include your shooting details and post processing info as well.

    The size of your signature is a bit distracting.

    Looking forward to more!

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    A beautiful capture. The signature detracts from the simplicity of the image. I like Mike's comment about a little off the width to make it more vertical.

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