gorgeous light here Ben...although overall it seems just a tad underexposed to my eye
I also think the composition would have been stronger if the lioness looking back was more to the RHS. I don't mind the shot looking over the OOF lying pride, but do you also have a smidge to add to the bottom?
This is a different view of lions and really is the way they spend a good part of the day. I do like the perspective and also agree with Morkel's comp suggestion.
Ben, nice repost. As Morkel suggested some more of a crop from the top and I think cropping from the right and moving the lion to the right better balances the image.