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    100-400 L IS
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    gorgeous light here Ben...although overall it seems just a tad underexposed to my eye
    I also think the composition would have been stronger if the lioness looking back was more to the RHS. I don't mind the shot looking over the OOF lying pride, but do you also have a smidge to add to the bottom?
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    Thanks for the suggestions. I do have a little at the bottom. I am not happy with the sharpness-much better in CR5 before the post.

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    I enjoy the warm tones of the image. The subjects convey a sense of a lazy morning. Very nice. I agree with Morkel's comp suggestion.

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    This is a different view of lions and really is the way they spend a good part of the day. I do like the perspective and also agree with Morkel's comp suggestion.

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    Repost with more fore ground an more space to the right.
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    Ben, do you sharpen after resizing?

    repost looks better...I would still have a little less room on top
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    Ben, nice repost. As Morkel suggested some more of a crop from the top and I think cropping from the right and moving the lion to the right better balances the image.

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