From our town beach on the Long Island sound where egrets gather prior to fishing. Despite there being several trees that they could perch in , they all prefer this one and posture for their chosen spots. (There was a wing tip of a black crown night heron in the sky that had to be ejected.)
Grace, the incoming egret is nicely framed between the perched egrets, and I like the space in this. Whites look good, and agree removing the spare wings would work.
Nice action. I like the overall feel here, and the incoming bird is placed and posed perfectly. I wish the second egret from right had a better HA (I know, we can't ask for everything in such a scene right!) and find the snowy at right too close to the edge IMO...I'd either add back a sliver more canvas, or, GASP....remove it completely(!).
Nice image Grace, I too really like the one bird looking up at the one landing. Great handling of the exposure with so many whites. Love the JKF analagy.
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