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    Vinny La Scalza
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    Default Cattle Egret

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    This was taken at Gatorland on Friday.
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    Maxis Gamez
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    Hi Vinny,

    The whites are too hot in the back side of the Egret. I would like to see a little more room on top. The image also looks over-sharpened.

    Keep them coming!

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    Again, an excellent critique by Maxis. All are advised to check out "How White the Whites?" in the Eductational Resources Forum. You did find a good situation and that is a plus. The bird's head is turned slightly away and you need a bit more room at the top. Final verdict: lots of room for improvement.

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    Robert O'Toole
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    Beautiful Cattle Egret.

    Agreed with the above comments.

    Keep on improving and keep posting.

    Robert

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    Mike Godwin
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    Nice shot and composition, I like them tight in the frame personally. Very nice back lighting on the neck and crest, just a little hot on the back. Good job Vinny... keep 'em coming!

    Mike Godwin
    Gatorland

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