Again, an excellent critique by Maxis. All are advised to check out "How White the Whites?" in the Eductational Resources Forum. You did find a good situation and that is a plus. The bird's head is turned slightly away and you need a bit more room at the top. Final verdict: lots of room for improvement.
later and love, artie
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Nice shot and composition, I like them tight in the frame personally. Very nice back lighting on the neck and crest, just a little hot on the back. Good job Vinny... keep 'em coming!