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    Canon 1D Mark IV
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    This would make a very nice pano! Crop it from just above the Canada Goose head.

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    I agree with Ed that the geese must go. The image looks fairly sharp. The off-angled light here is anything but exciting. Had all three birds been in the full wings down position this would have been much more powerful. The wing position of the middle bird--pancake flat--is unfortunate. I do like the look of the grasses covered with snow or ice.
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    Agree with the crop suggestion . The original image is also just great . The snow covered vegetation makes it so surreal . Cloning the Canadian Geese and keep the same crop should also work .

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    Thanks to all
    Do you think could better change the position so the sswans go from right to left ?
    Thanks

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    so it is better ?

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    Needs more room on the bottom and the wing positions cannot be helped by Photoshop....
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Needs more room on the bottom and the wing positions cannot be helped by Photoshop....
    Thanks Arthur
    I will put more space botton...and I will try another shoot (if I have) with different wing position of the second swan.
    The swans position (left to right) is better ?
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    YAW and good plan. For me left to right or the opposite does not matter :)
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    I cloned the geese on the ground while keeping the original crop intact .

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    And this is the original suggestion of the crop .

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    Quote Originally Posted by RakeshDhareshwar View Post
    And this is the original suggestion of the crop .
    Thanks a lot
    It coul be right. I prefer more space in front

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