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    Stuart:

    Elegant pose, sharp, good BG, breeding colors.

    Head angled away a bit.

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    Nice pic. Very well done.
    It feels a little tight at the top to me. To balance it I would probably crop the lower rt corner up so that the feet are the same distance from the lower/rt edges as the wing is from the top. Then crop in from lt so that the lt 1/3 line falls on the eye.

    The only other thing is the background seems "busy" with all of the dark spots...I might try to tone that down with a blur or something.

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    excellent pose , nice wing pose and BG here
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    Nice wing position and good exposure control. I would place him lower in the frame.

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    Lovely light exposure and wing position...Also agree about lower in the frame and maybe a touch off on the right and a bit more on the left...But thats personal

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