Good COMP and head angle. I would get rid of the curved twig and the white stuff above her tail. Face could be lightened a bit. Later and love, artie
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For me I would not have guessed you have used flash at all. The background to the right is a little fussy - but that is the way it was. If you wanted to capture the situation as it was it is fantastic, if you feel the need to "improve" then perhaps move a little clutter as Artie suggests.
I think the detail is superb
Jon
Thanks all. I appreciate all your comments and criticisms. I see what you mean about the twig. Otherwise, I have a preference for a nature background so it doesn't bother me a whole lot. I seek to capture nature as it is (and maybe improve on it just a little bit ;)).