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    Taken at the Leguna Seca Ranch in Texas during NANPA Summit.

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    Gary:

    The pose here is nice, alert, heads up,nice angle.
    The sense of isolation from the environment is good, really highlights the bird.

    Bird is very sharp. I think it could go a bit brighter on the bird.

    Wish there was a catchlight to give a little spark to the eye. I might try a version with the OOF brown foreground overpainted lightly with green to try to blend it in with the OOF vegetation.

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    Nice pose Gary and you have a nice soft foreground & background. I agree 1000% with Randy - you definitely need some type of reflection or catch-light in the eye.

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    Hey Gary,
    Can't add much to the excellent advice above. I'm not the biggest fan of OOF FG's......but my personal preference. I heard the NANPA summit was a bit slow this year.....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gary Hamilton View Post
    Taken at the Leguna Seca Ranch in Texas during NANPA Summit.

    Canon 7D
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    f/7.1
    Nice comp and shooting angle. I might try brightening the eye...it's too bad there isn't catchlight. Nice job!

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    Hi Gary, the comp suits the pose, and I actually like OOF FG's. I would maybe darken the BG.

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    Gary, I love the scene you captured here!! I agree the eye needed something...but there is already a faint reflection on the top part of it so the trick was simply to enhance it. I used the dodge tool for that, as well as the rest of the iris. Since I had your image in PS I went ahead and also lightened the face and belly (also dodge tool), then removed what I thought was a greenish cast (colour balance, to taste), painted the lower FG element with a bit of green (as per Randy's suggestion, and tint borrowed from the BG) and burned the very lower part a bit, removed a couple of white spots near the throat (clone tool) Hope you like it as the image is worthy of some PP TLC!

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    Thanks Randy and everyone for your comments and suggestions. Daniel, I really like your repost. Thanks for taking the time to do it and for your explanation. It looks like I have a little project for tonight.

    Yes, NANPA was a little slow but I split my time between the Summit activities and the photography ranches and nature preserves, making it a nice trip overall. I highly recommend the ranches for anyone visiting the Rio Grande Valley area.

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    I like the low angle and alert pose. Daniels repost really makes the most of this image. Well done Gary and Daniel!

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    You're welcome Gary!

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