Hey Joe,
Light and perch look VG.....but I am a tight crop guy.....so that much perch doesn't do it for me. I would go tighter in that or if you wanted to keep the orientation.....vert. It's not that I need every image tight.....but to me the perch is more prominant than the robin.....so I would eliminate most of it even if you keep the rest of the negative space. I hope that makes sense!