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    This was shot just before the mating sequence which I posted yesterday

    Canon 7D
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    1//1600sec f/9 ISO 800 HH

    Crop, S/H, Sharpening in CS5
    NR on BG in Noiseware Pro

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    Hi,

    It's a nice attempt, but I find a few things that aren't quite right. The birds are a bit small in the frame, and they look a bit soft to me. Perhaps a more horizontal crop with removal of some of the top bg, some extra sharpening of the birds' feathering, and a touch of contrast reduction with extra clarity on the head and neck areas, would improve it a little. I love the way the R. hand bird's bill is laying on the water, and the reflections.

    If you don't mind, perhaps something like this?

    Richard

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    Thank you, Richard. No question that I like your repost better than the original!

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    Hello Ian. Wonderful pic you have here. Great timing, wonderful colors. The repost is great. Well done.

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