
Originally Posted by
Alan Lillich
An interesting lesson in proper viewing distance. It is about 9" high on my monitor and I sit about 24" away from the monitor. From that view it feels top heavy, the sun is too bright, I can feel my eyes moving up and down between sun and bird. If I move back to about 6' from the monitor it becomes cohesive and balanced, the red stripes in the reflection are actually more visible and counter the sun.
Did you shoot the top first? Is the +1 off of metering with the sun in the frame? I have yet to come anywhere close to the precision of your sunset exposures.
Had you thought about replacing the grey water area with an orange gradient from the saturated bottom to the pastel near the far shore?