Interesting behavioural image and it sure gives a feeling of movement. Agree that it would have been much stronger if the head of the middle bird had been visible. Then I am not sure if the birds should be this grey or if one could possibly up the exposure a bit (there are some areas already that look rather hot).
Hi Ian, I like the entire photo....untill i recognized the coot in the bg...I'm not sure if it adds, or hurts the image .I do know ,my eye keeps going to it ...now..:(
Looks like you have three China Geese there Ian. The light is sweet and you captured some good action. It would have been really nice to see all three heads! I might give a bit more room at the top but I like the pano crop.
Ian, lovely image and yes I agree with your assessment of the middle bird, but still love the lighting, action and the pan crop. I would clone out the coot, IMHO. Very nice.