I like the eye contact, the sharp central body, and the blurring of the wings emphasizing the fact that this bird was in flight!
I would suggest cropping away some canvass on the right, and adding canvass on the left if possible, to give the bird more space to fly into. And there is a white spot on the lower foot that I would clone out.
But otherwise, well done!
Excellent flight capture. Unusual BG for a gull, I like it. I also like the banking flight position and dangling feet. I agree with more canvass on the left.
Peter
Yes to too far forward in the frame. I like the SH of the head but not the head angle as the bird's head is angled away from us. I do like the motion blur in the far wing.
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