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    Canon 7d
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    Ben:

    I like the various colors layered on the bird, good head angle, colors .

    The OOF branch on the right side is a bit distracting as it angles across the frame.

    Shooting angle just a bit steep

    I keep looking at the sharpness, and think the head could stand a bit more.

    Cheers

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    Really like this portrait and the colors, the OOF elements really make this photo work for me as they serve to frame the bird..

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    Great color ,profile turned head nicely, but angle off.
    Previously mentioned softness of eye and feathers around it. Shoulder feathers suggest main focus was there.

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    Lovely looking bird with very nice colours.

    I like the lush habitat as well.

    If mine I would try a bit more selective sharpening as mentioned.

    Dave

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    Lovely iridescence on the sunbird, and I like the inquisitive pose. Pity about the OOF foliage in the FG.

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    Thanks for all the comments and suggestions.

    The new edit-slightly cropped and some sharpening applied.

    Ben

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