Love the low angle, and I like the bud there as is, and also love the curled leaf just ahead of the raised foot. Good water spittin' action. Not crazy about the yellow spot above the head, nor the greenish one above the tail (you could always burn those to see if that lessens their impact), and of course the HA that you've mentioned yourself. Apology accepted.
I hope you had a life jacket on, because the angle of this shot makes me think the boat was sinking!
Nice discussion above. I think the big bud behind the bird is a neat environmental component, but in a perfect world, I would wish it were just a bit further away from the bird. (More to the left)