I took this shot last week about 15 minutes before the sun set below the horizon. I like to watch the storks who seem as interested in me as I am in them.
D300s 600 VR with 1.4 tc - 1/800 f5.6 - +.3 EC at (auto) iso 360
The eye and head placed in the middle. This could be alleviated by turning the square crop into a vertical crop. The colors and details here are gorgeous.
Wait, I'd like a guess. What's bothering you is the loud light on the stork's shoulder. At least, that's what's bothering me. Any way you can recover some of the details?