Another Phoenix Zoo image. Although I usually try to get rid of any signs of captivity in my zoo images, I didn't think the behavior here warranted that.
I wrestled with the crop and, as you say Dave, the larger crop made it less pleasing to my eye. The angles of the canopy seemed to me to follow the direction of his eye and movement and I liked that.
I also think you did very well on the choice of crop - the nylon sail definitely needed to be included here. If this were mind, I think I'd clone out the whole and the one dark spot on the right side.