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    Interesting image. I like the colors, backlighting and upraised wings. The image might have had more impact if the birds had been coming toward you.

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    Yes, interesting. I agree the image would have been stronger had the egrets bee flying towards us rather than away, and I feel the image looks a bit washed out...darkening the midtones or darks would add a bit more punch to it.

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    Great mood shot. The separation of the birds and progress from lower left to upper right seal the deal.

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    Interesting image. I like the separation here. Excellent suggestion from Dan on darkening the midtones. I would also take a bit off the left. TFS.

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    Well seen. It looks a bit dirty because of the flying stuff in the BG and that dark bit on the center FG. Nicely done.

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