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    Default Red-billed Teal

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    Went for a tight crop with this pose and would appreciate feedback. About a 50% crop so have more space.

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    C&C most welcome.

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    Stunning feather detail in this sshot but i feel that opening up the midtones and shadows a bit might improve this a lot.

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    Jeroen Stel

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    I think bottom is fine but some more on top and on right to balance might be better, I think. Great details and eye contact. Light angle has sculpted the feathers nicely. I havent seen this bird...can it go a little brighter?

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    Pieter:

    superb eye contact, head angle, good shooting angle.

    I do appreciate the thoughts from Jeroen and Kaustubh about brighting it up.

    I can see tweaking the curves a bit, but I rather like the dramatic lighting you have.

    Agree with Kautubh, bit more top and right.

    Cheers

    Randy

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    Thanks a lot for the feedback Jeroen, Kaustubh and Randy. Will work on a version with more space. Before I go off to work a quick repost with a brighter image.

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    Hi Pieter, great HA, and just love the light on the head, as it brings out the eye so well. Good sharpness in that area too. The other guys have covered the space. Well captured.

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    Thanks for the feedback Stuart.

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