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    Bill Randall
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    f/9, 1/40, iso 500, 35mm. Nothing added or subtracted, but lots of adjustments to contrast during conversion.

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    Hi Bill, I like the comp with the hay acting as a leading line bringing the eye to the rear. I might have given just a bit more room on the left as to show all the hay line. The sepia tone is effective and gives the image an aged look to it. The tree is a strong center of interest and well placed. The sky is interesting but I see noise in the clouds and in this case I don't feel the vignetting is a plus...

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hey Bill,
    I think comp wise you did pretty well as Dave mentioned. I'm ok with grain in the sky.....but not everyone likes that look. I do think you went a bit strong with the vignette......I think the idea is a good one.....just back off the strength a bit.

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    Bill Randall
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    The grain was intentional because of a film simulation. I like the grain and the sepia. A close friend of mine hates both and gives me grief every time I use it in a conversion. So you got to go with what you like. The vignette seems a bit darker here than on my file copy, but I agree it is a little heavy here. I don't understand what causes that. Thanks for the response gentlemen, I do appriceate it.

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Bill,

    You edid a good job with using the Weiss in the filed to provide strong leading lines in the field. The tree is a well placed anchor. I agree that a tad more on the left to avoid clipping one of the rows would have been good but neot a deal breaker.

    I like the sepia look and the grain.

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