
Originally Posted by
Roman Kurywczak
Hey Richard,
I think this one works better than all the other posts! Why? Well yes.....there really is no focal point.....but this one is more about the subtleness of colors and the soft feel and look. You can break rules but many more things need to come together to be effective.....as they did in this one! I would remove the bouy? in the water around 4:30.......and you can consider perhaps doing a surface blur (Jules favorite trick) on the water......to soften the look and feel even more......just some ideas to toy with but this is my favorite of the series!