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    Surf after a winter storm is fierce, and sometimes deadly. The gulls don't seem to mind, though. Pescadero, California.

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    I like the DOF here, you knew what you wanted and got it!
    Perhaps a shade dark overall though, FP possibly wasnt the bird?

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    Very nice environmental shot and I like the inclusion of the bird.

    I like the idea of a bit of crop off bottom leaving just a strip of surf and then the big rocks and a bit off left to close the gap so to speak.

    Nicely exposed and good to see the ocean spray.

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    Very good environment shot, the inclusion of the bird help me feel how big the wave is. All the slash from the wave really give a dynamic and powerful feel to this image. TFS.

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    This is a lovely moody image. I really like it.

    If it were mine, I might try to lighten and sharpen the gull just a bit. I wouldn't take much if anything off the left, but I might try just a bit off the right and a slice from the top of the image to put more emphasis on both the flight of the bird and the wonderful layers you have here. Also I think the image is just a bit dark.

    Overall, it's beautiful as is

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    This is a powerful shot. One can almost hear the waves crashing. Very beautiful. Just needs a bit more light.

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    What a beautiful image, Bill! You can tell you were careful about getting the bird in just the right place and the power of the surf is a real attention-getter. I do agree that the blues in the BG ocean are lovely but are so dark that part of the gull almost gets lost so I recropped the image, putting the bird in the upper right ROT's position and then did a shadow/highlight adjustment to bring those dark blues up a little bit. These are just suggestions but thought they were worthy of a look.

    I also think the image would work very well with a pano crop as well.

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    Thanks for the comments and suggestions for improvement. I like the changes you made, Julie. Thanks.

    Bill

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Leroy View Post
    Very nice environmental shot and I like the inclusion of the bird.

    I like the idea of a bit of crop off bottom leaving just a strip of surf and then the big rocks and a bit off left to close the gap so to speak.

    Nicely exposed and good to see the ocean spray.
    My thoughts exactly.

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