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    Default Ring-billed Gull: In-flight portrait

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    Still practicing on the gulls. This time, trying to see if I could hand-hold the 500+1.4X. (It's hard on my aging shoulders.) Trouble here was that the bird zoomed in so close in the strong wind that all I got of him was his head and torso, but I thought it made for an interesting, if unusual, comp. Slight crop. C&C appreciated.

    D90 | 500f4 + 1.4X | ISO 640 | 1/4000s @ f/7.1 | -0.7 EV | HH

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    Bill, I LOVE this! I really feel like I'm right there with him and the angle and unusual comp doesn't bother me at all because everything is technically very strong. I really like that we can see the red around his eye and on the corner of his mouth and your whites are stunning. Only suggestion I can come up with would be to play with the top wing where the blue shadow is and see if you can't lighten in and/or take down the blue cast a bit and get it more towards a neutral gray.

    Really interesting perspective - whether it was a mistake or not you had the good sense to recognize it as a keeper.

    Now that I look at it you might take a bit off the bottom of the frame so it doesn't look like an accident so much as a super tight crop.

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    Really good job with the focusing while hand-holding 500+1.4x, need skill to find the bird in the view finder and able to take a good focus shot like this. Haven't seen many close up show of BIF but I do like this composition, very well done. Agree about cropping more off the bottom.

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    That is fantastic Bill! Have not seen one like this, what a great perspective. Excellent detail, colors.

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    What a fine accident.

    I think you have the crop just right, the light works well and your focus could not have been improved with a month to think about it.

    Are you familiar with the trick of squeezing your elbows tight into your body to help take some of strain off the shoulders?

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    I really like this, a very excellent change from the norm. Great job hand holding that big lens.

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    I think the composition is great, it really evokes speed and elegance of an animal that belongs in the air. Incredible hand held job. I like the combination of tight top and left with space on bottom and right.

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    Oh, Bill, what an absolutely delightful image. You have captured such wonderful detail, the head angle is perfect, there is such wonderful motion. Nicely done! :-)

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