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    Hi
    heres another Ruff for your critique

    I took several pics today, think this is a little different pose
    they were pretty close to the hide.

    f 8 (11?) DUE TO CONVERTER
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    Set CB , NR on BG, USM and SS on jpeg

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    Richard, I like the pose and the framing . Lighting is nice with catchlight in eye and DOF is right-on IMHO.

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    Hurrah thanks Ian

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    I agree...this is very nicely exposed and the pose/eye contact is great! I might encourage you to try to clone out the one rock that is near his face, though...if you could get rid of that and not leave any cloning evidence I think it would really take the image up another notch.

    DOf also looks very good!

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    Hi Julie

    Goodbye rock -tomorrow though, mind you I am going back to this site tomorrow
    (makes note - dont get rocks in bad places):)

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    Richard, I like the pose and the framing. That one bright spot on the left going into the head is a little distracting to me. Nicely done.

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    Fantastic pose and composition. Really nice detail as well. I agree about the rock and bright spot.
    Peter

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    Thanks all

    the rock and white area cloned out


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    I see some slight remnants of the cloning work on the rock.

    However, I think this is my favorite of your ruff series. Well done!

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    Hi Ben

    I think I see it, and I hope its now gone.
    glad you like some of the shots, sorry it's a bit mono -species round here at the moment
    but with each one , theres something to learn
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    Richard, your last repost is very nice. I really like the BG as well as the rocks in the FG. Only suggestion I might add is it possible to do some selective sharpening around his eye? If so, that might help take an already very good photo up a notch, IMHO. TFS

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