
Originally Posted by
Robert Amoruso
Norm, the background looks good without distraction. The strong directional light is causing a lost of detail on the left side of the face due to shadow (fill-flash good here). Overall if you could have diffused the light that would be preferrable. Working more detail on the shadow side of the face I might have lik thed the head-on look better. In the available light, a sideways look at a turned head probably would have been better here.
I would have preferred not to see the top leave and bud clipped.