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    Took this beauty the other day and I thought I would play around with Topaz Clean with some minor adjustments in PSE7---I took it out as far as I could to get the full effect----normally would leave some edges-----CC welcomed---Thanks for looking


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    Steve, I think adding canvas to the sides would be the way to go. I like the Clean filter and what it has done to the look of the head. I might tone down some of the brighter whites if it were mine. They probably got brighter w/ conversion and filtering. Nice sharp eye and wonderful pose.:)

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    Nice wings-up and head turned pose, Steve. The Clean effect on head feathers works very well. Overall the bird seems really tight in the frame. I would either give it more room right and left, OR crop it down to show only head, talons with fish, and part of the wings.

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    Excellent capture Steve! Does feel tight on the sides to me. Feels a bit contrasty to me, mostly due to the direct sunlight. You may have just a tad too much sharpening, mostly on the face and upper edges of the wings. Nicely done, hope to see more of you in OOTB!
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    Steve, the Clean worked really well on this image. The pose is great but another vote for a little more "wiggle" room on either side.:)
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    Great pose, Steve. I like the topaz effect. Agree with the suggestions already given, I would also take some off the top.
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