A good head angle, and for me the noise is not too bad.
I would crop a bit from the top to remove the dark patches and bring the eye to somewhere around the upper thirds line.
I think you made a good attempt here with a difficult bird to expose for. However, on checking the histogram, some of the whites are still blocked, especially on the breast. So, you are somewhere in the middle :) Some of the whites are detail-less, while the black on the head also lacks detail. I think I would try and expose to get either details in the blacks or keep the whites all in range.
The eye could be a touch sharper.
What camera where you using? With the 7D I find little difference between the intermediate stop ISOs and the higher full stop, e.g. between 1250 and 1600. Therefore, I have set it to only use full stop ISO values.
advice on exposure good thanks.
I was trying to add light to avoid noise at the high ISO, using that as at lower ISO no point in taking shot SS too low.
I must practice this trade off or get my tripod out!
I assume you shot RAW. If so try to recover some of the whites and fill the blacks in Adobe Camera Raw. I would suggest a couple more things- the reflection is not very strong so I would consider cropping it out. Also, the image needs some more sharpening. I tried this in Photoshop and it will take some significant sharpening without looking oversharpened.
Last edited by John Chardine; 01-03-2011 at 09:54 PM.
Reason: made comment about tail clipping then realised I should have been scrolling the image- sorry
Recropped to include less reflection, more sharpening in SS PS5, Max recovery slider in CR5, blacks adjusted just to clipping point.
Looks a lot better to me
btw I took many shots and may well have not picked the best, will sort through more today:)
Please keep up the excellent critiques!
Rich