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    Sony A850~Sony 70-400G@330mm~ISO 1250~1/800sec~F5.6~manual exposure~overcast~HH~12-31-2020~Brazos Bend State Park,Texas~CS5~Redfield Fractalius
    For a change of pace from the avian subjects, a relatively young (5ft) gator crossing the path.
    Usual subtle frac treatment to bring out detail of the gator and path, but not the background. comments and critique welcomed. regards~Bill

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    Outstanding composition, Bill. Love the elevated walking pose crossing. I really like the way you used the light here. Great details. I probably would remove the leaf hanging out of the jaw, if it were mine.

    ps. I had no idea there are gators in Brazos State Park!!!

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    That's a marvelous shot and treatment Bill! I love the color tones and softness of the background! That looks like a low angle of shooting and at 330mm you were close! Brave soul. I've seen them run across the path and they are fast. I always wonder how long I could fend them off with my tripod. :)

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    Agree with above. Glad you separated the gator from the background in your processing. Make it stand out so well against the beautifully soft background. The underbelly glows. Nice work.

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    Nice treatment! The gator really stands out. I would also remove the leaf. :)

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    Nice soft color tones and comp. The gator looks like he is posing. I like how you faded out the BG a bit. Nicely done.:)

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    Very nice comp and pose. I like the light use of fractalius to bring out details in the path. Nice work!

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    I would TOTALLY leave the leaf...that burst of green is remarkable and really draws your attention to the alligator. Plus...it makes him almost look sweet!

    I would remove the one small spot on the ground just below his jaw, though.

    Lovely DOF on this...gosh, he seems almost 3D.

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    Thanks everyone for the encouragement! I like the leaf, as Julie, but somehow missed the clump of dirt on the ground under the jaw. It needs eviction.
    regards~Bill

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    Great pose and treatment, Bill. I love how the gator stands out from the soft BG as though in 3d. Very well done! :)
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