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    Peter Farrell
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    I think this is a Song Sparrow. Taken in James City County, VA early morning yestaerday after our 10" snowfall. (thats the most we have had in 21 years) Sony A700, 70-400G @400mm f5.6
    1/400, iso800. spot metering on the bird. About 70% of FF. I cloned out most of the OOF BG branches, de-saturated the BG blues, levels, contrast boost and usm on bird. I have a version with all the OOF branches removed but I liked this one better.

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    oh lovely - that makes a wonderful perch for that very detailed bird. I really like the warm colors of the bird against the cold grey background. you might want to pull the selection on the bird in a little tighter, down by its legs the background is lighter between the feathers than in the open space.

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    I forgot to mention that I added the catchlight in the eye.
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    Hey Peter, sounds like you better find your snow boots! We got slammed here in the Midwest last Christmas so I'm pretty glad it missed us this time around.

    I like what you've got here - the bird is very nice and you did a really nice job on the catchlight. You've got good details throughout the length of the bird and a good pose/HA.

    I can see why you left the other branches in - it would be pretty stark without them - but I think in the future this would work better with the extraneous branches just a little bit more in focus. They don't need to be razor sharp but a bit more definition would be nice.

    Good luck with all the shoveling! :)

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    Peter,

    Greetings. Great detail and good work on the catch light. The white vacancies in the lower bg branch are a little hard to explain (snow?) without a bit more detail (along the lines of what Jules mentions). I like the diagonal perch.

    Cheers,

    -Yamo-

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    Nicely done Peter! I like the softened BG and the detail of the sparrow. Stay safe and warm.
    Nancy

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    Lovely looking Song Sparrow and I really like the perch.

    Dave

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