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    First post in a while. Critique of any kind would be greatly appreciated. I have a couple of things that I am not happy with. 1. The OOF branch, 2. The sharpness around the eye is not great - I think due to focus hitting top of shoulder not eye (The bird moved, I swear it!!) 3. I should have cranked the ISO further to get a faster shutter speed and stopped down the aperture to help DOF a little.

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    1/200sec @ f/7.1
    420mm, ISO1000, 0ev
    Evaluative Metering
    Nikon D3s, AF-S 300mm f/4, AF-S TC-14EII

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    Great lookback pose Rob. Nice and sharp around head. The eye looks sharp to me. The tail in images like this forms a prominent part of the image so it is better to try to get the whole bird within the depth of field- you mention this. I agree that the second OOF branch is distracting- it would also be fairly easy to remove with some masking.

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    Hey Rob, I really like the HA, and the eye looks sharp to me as well. If I knew how to do it I would remove the OOF branch. Do you know if this is a male or female? Nice shot.

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    Very nice shot head is sharp and I would also remove the OOF branch

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    I can't see the image...did you pull it or are we having technical difficulties?

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    Just mask off the areas you do not want to be affected (Quickmask), then use the close tool to fill in. When masking something like this, use a medium hard brush so that the masking is fairly precise. Here is the result for a 5 min job.

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    Thank you for the comments.
    Julie - I am hosting the image so not sure what the problem was.
    annmpacheco - I am not 100% sure, however I believe it is a male. The colouring is very subtle which confused me. I thought perhaps it might be a young male. Any insight from anyone would be awesome.
    John - Thank you for the tips on the masking - you did an amazing job for 5 mins of work. The shot looks 100 times better without the OOF branch.

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